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07:1507:15, 5 March 2014 diff hist −6 m Chapter 49: 476-483 →Page 478
07:1307:13, 5 March 2014 diff hist +12 Chapter 49: 476-483 →Page 478
07:1207:12, 5 March 2014 diff hist +235 Chapter 49: 476-483 →Page 478
04:1404:14, 5 March 2014 diff hist −334 Chapter 48: 466-475 →Page 469: when Mason says "last winter" he just means "the most recent winter." the alternate explanation, that they had encountered felipe prior to coming to the US and TP/Revd didn't mention it, is unlikely current

19:0819:08, 1 March 2014 diff hist −124 Chapter 46: 452-459 →Page 453: this shouldn't be here; none of the linked annotation has any bearing on this one other than saying it's the army from Prussia which is kind of obvious. the unnecessary annotation makes it seem relevant and breaks flow current

23:0223:02, 27 February 2014 diff hist +1 Chapter 42: 422-435 →Page 432: another accent
23:0223:02, 27 February 2014 diff hist 0 Chapter 42: 422-435 →Page 432: that's an accent. not really sure this is necessary anyway...
22:5622:56, 27 February 2014 diff hist −94 Chapter 42: 422-435 →Page 431: removed the second link, which just points to the same first link.
22:5222:52, 27 February 2014 diff hist −271 Chapter 42: 422-435 →Page 427: also a spoiler, but I feel bad because the information is helpful for first-time readers and could maybe be phrased differently. if anyone is watching these edits...
22:2222:22, 27 February 2014 diff hist −31 Chapter 42: 422-435 →Page 427: removed spoiler
22:2022:20, 27 February 2014 diff hist −112 Chapter 42: 422-435 →Page 426: the text says this in very obvious language so the annotation serves no purpose
22:1722:17, 27 February 2014 diff hist −472 Chapter 42: 422-435 →Page 422: this is not relevant to M&D—just confuses things.
14:3414:34, 27 February 2014 diff hist −538 Chapter 41: 410-421 →Page 419: this is another case of misunderstanding the annotated text. "these days" could be the 1760s or 1780s, doesn't really matter. "once lay" just means Lady Lepton is wearing older fashions, the time isn't specified. current

11:3911:39, 26 February 2014 diff hist −117 Chapter 39: 391-398 →Page 394: either this annotation simply misunderstands who is speaking, or it's a big spoiler. current

12:0912:09, 16 February 2014 diff hist −16 Chapter 13: 125-145 →Page 142: he's saying he studied the observations made by Zhang previously, not that he worked with him personally. hence this is not anachronistic
12:0812:08, 16 February 2014 diff hist −191 Chapter 13: 125-145 →Page 137: this is really clear in context.
12:0512:05, 16 February 2014 diff hist −301 Chapter 13: 125-145 →Page 130: the hypothesis mentioned here isn't as relevant as it's made out to be, even putting aside the fact that Jaynes claimed the bicameral mind broke down thousands of years before the events of M&D
12:0112:01, 16 February 2014 diff hist −184 Chapter 13: 125-145 →Page 132: again, this has nothing to do with America
12:0012:00, 16 February 2014 diff hist −283 Chapter 13: 125-145 →Page 129: someone who edited this page seems to be confusing St. Helena with St. Helens. No Americans are present in this chapter. the line annotated was about people not owning mirrors